i got some thoughts if ya wanna
i like the idea man! always appreciate remixes of completely other genres
overall mix-down seems to be pretty good, but (dunno if its coz of the earphones im using) that 4 note lead melody seems to be a lil too loud and those chopped and edited ghost snares could be a tad louder for my taste
maybe that melody could use some more delay/reverb? just an idea
also, and im sure you'll do that while mastering, that bass needs a bit more thiccness
real good blueprint you got here doe!