PopCycle - Dawn Breeze - Liquid dnb

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by bansal321, Aug 11, 2011.

  1. bansal321

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    any advice? anything missing? speak your mind....
     
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    piano is really nice, vocal works well, snare could do with a bit more punch imo, also bass seems a bit low in the mix to me.

    nice tune tho mate
     
  3. bansal321

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    thanks for the review, im gunna try and work on the bass and a few other things tonight, get it polished i just wanted to see what the general opinion was to it
     
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    generally very nice, just some tweaking needed i think
     
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    hey I really like it. Could do with more nice deep sub under it. The vocal works really well. Good stuff.
     
  6. bansal321

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    Hey man thanks again for checking out the track, im going to work on it this weekend, so ill repost it at a later date with improved bass
     
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    wicked vibe mate! smooth as, i guess the drum beat could do with another old school break over the top to add more shuffle in the high freqs, maybe just me personally. sick tune still
     
  8. bansal321

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    cheers for the kind comments pal!!!
     
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    Th piano is beautiful. Did you write it or play it? The vocals bouncing around are perfect. I have no complaints about the song.
     
  10. bansal321

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    hey, i wrote it into logic and played around with the eq and reverb, im glad you're liking the sound! :)
     
  11. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Yea me too. It has this lounge, bitter sweet feeling. You know when your depressed and you go to the dim lit bar with piano player that makes you even more depressed. Any way I like songs most when they provoke emotions in me and this one a winner.
     
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    lovin the piano man;P great chords:D daaamn man:D GREAT TUNE:D
     
  13. bansal321

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    really big thank you!
     
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    yeah just listening again, great work mate