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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by usualsuspects, Jul 10, 2013.

  1. usualsuspects

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    It's good overall; you've got some great bass. It kind of wanders around 1:50, and I wonder if you could clarify your musical motives a bit (simplify them, have more note-based voices in between the wobs).

    The breakdown has too much going on for my personal taste as a breakdown. Great end of the breakdown to lead into the second drop, though. Actually, both drops are pretty good. By 4:00 it again feels like it's wandering, and I'm not sure what story you're trying to tell, musically.

    Still, the mix is nice and clear, and everything sits well. I think you need to rethink structure, but otherwise you're most of the way there.