PLZ have a listen

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Dj Dirty Pimp, Dec 10, 2008.

  1. Dj Dirty Pimp

    Dj Dirty Pimp Active Member

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    Hey all check out my new tune im working on.. ITS unfinished.

    any advice/ tips would be good. Its still in the really early stages, n this is literally a preview of work so far


    http://www.myspace.com/12inchpimp

    thanks for our help :)

    Pimpin ;) :gang_bang
     
  2. sati

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    I really like the guitar sample that plays on the downbeat (where is it from?) -- you may consider replacing the synthetic piano with real piano samples, and do somethign with chords rather than stray keys --

    Also, you may want to layer your drums a bit and bring up the high frequencies to brighten things up --

    Voice samples are a bit too loud. Wobbly bass is pretty cool, there is definitely room in this mix for a lot more if that's something you would be interested in!

    Keep it up!
     
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    Dj Dirty Pimp Active Member

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    cheers for ur help mate, il try that ;)
     
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    Dan M hard gay northern bear

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    I AGREE WIV SATI ON THE DRUMS. OTHER THAN THAT I LIKE IT. ITS GOT A FRESH FEEL TO IT
     
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    Dj Dirty Pimp Active Member

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    cheers man, i know drums are my weakest point, i even posted on Dogs on Acid on how to improve my drums, im better than i was.... i guess i just gotta keep perfecting!

    n yeh the levels on the sample n piano are a bit high