DnB Please rate first track

[canabispar]

Hello World!
I am new in Producing, I try to create sketches and studying theoretical material for about two years, I have a great passion but as always too little time!
This is my first fully finished track, it took me about a month for two or three hours a day. I'd like to hear feedback and criticism especially in composition and arrangement!

https://soundcloud.com/canabisparanoia%2Fdiesel-scum

 

[AdamDNB]

I'm really liking this, good work

 

[maschinistom]

i like your track as well, nice build up and good sound. i would add some bass freq. for a bit more punch, maybe use EQ or transient shaper ..

 

[konee]

Nice tune! Good composed and arranged.
I follow maschinistom with his suggestions and maybe add just a bit more brilliance to the hihats (boost at 10kHz)