PLEASE GUYS HELP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by LIQUID ONE, Oct 20, 2009.

  1. LIQUID ONE

    LIQUID ONE New Member

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    I AM WORKING ON A NEW TRACK SO FAR I GOT A 24 BAR INTRO AND 16 BARS OF THE FRIST DROP. STILL NEEDS ALOT OF WORK AND MORE SFX.. THERE IS NO SAMPLE IN THE TRACK. I MADE THE DRUMS. PLEASE TELL ME IF THEY SUCK =).. I HAVE ONE DREAM IN MY LIFE AND THAT IS TO MAKE A DANCE FLOOR BANGER. PLEASE GUYS ANY ADVICE IS GOOD + AND -. THANKS



    http://soundcloud.com/liquid-one/dnb-track-2
     
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    I aint no pro yea but u dont av 24 bar intros bruv, 32 bars. lol
     
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  5. Lucidproduction

    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    well actually yes there is 24 bars before the drop.
    hurtzee, there is no rules for how long an intro must be. thats very narrow minded, lol

    the drums... are ok :) / they need a cymbal to keep them going...


    that high pitch synth that doesnt really have any melody to it??
    ouch man!

    bass is not supposed to be an annoying high pitched noise? if thats wot u fink it is?
    im saying this to help you, that synth you have used sounds really really horrible.


    i wud say listen to some drum and bass and use your ears to listen to what it sounds like,
    listen to alot more dnb
     
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    completely agree wiv lucidproduction, and he put it nicely.

    and i didnt mean the intro wasnt 24 bars lol, i jus meant that most tunes are 16, or 32 bars or so fourth in multiples of 16. i kno there are others that arent but from a djs point of view an to make everthing else easier its best stickin wiv 32 really.