The melodics are good. There's a little high glitch in the drums (?) that really bothers me.. you can hear it about 1:48...sounds like it's coming from the snare.
There's other weird stuff going on in the highs as well, like a break that is trying to come in at times but then goes out again... sounds much like a mp3 encoder issue.
I dunno, didn't do much for me, sounds a little too 'big', trying to incorporate more feeling than it actually does.
The trancey parts are executed well and you have sounds that go together very nicely tho that's a big plus.