Pixels2 - Ingsoc ( dubstep tune)

[fEARaNDlOATHING]

http://soundcloud.com/fearandloathing/pixels2

its a tune im playin on saturday with some live guitars over it. any tips on makin it better? (its a youth club gig btw)

 

[Mr Fletch]

Hmm..... not really doing anything for me.....sorry. dont like the intro noise, sounds unprocessed and like it belongs in a 16bit video game. Bass is very generic with no body to it, or any direction. It's also not loud or deep enough. Thats all I can really comment on, as thats all there is.

Sorry.