phantom bass - roughish sketch

[EvezDroppin]

ez fellas
first decent attempt at dark/minimal iv done so far. been workin on it for a bit... chucked the vocals on in about 5 minutes so they need rearranging and are a bit rough but some feedback on it so far would be wicked!

https://soundcloud.com/jack-evasion-evo%2Fphantom-bass-update

 

[djdevz]

pretty sweet man...im liking it a lot when it drops around 0:44

but im not sure about ur kick before then, when ur high end kick is by itself
sounds a lot better as a full kick..

maybe u could bring the percussion out a lil more or add some more..clicks/beeps/cowbell shiz

 

[~CriticalWaves~]

I like the feel this track has and your LFO bass sounds wicked but your drums need work the snare sounds like its lacking some punch and highs. Your kick also sounds funny maybee moar compression idk. it also sound like you need a good light tambs or sum rides at about 1:30

 

[dar kist]

not keen on that kick at all.. to high. as has been said bring the percussion out a bit, i hear what ya going for and it sounds good. keep it up

 

[luciduk]

im with critical, ummm... bass is sick on this...nice movement, i like this vibe definatly, but the drums really need to cut through moar, bass is slightly eating into them i think... could possibly just need a few EQ and mixdown tweaks on the drums.

 

[funkmod]

samples and bass are wicked just need make the drums a bit heavier and you got your self a nice tune man

 

[EvezDroppin]

thanks for the feedback guys think ill have a little play with it today much respect!

 

[EvezDroppin]

ez lads. nice one for the feedback so far!

https://soundcloud.com/jack-evasion-evo%2Ffightclub-draft

think the drums a tad better now.
just need to play wiht the fx and polish it up now, with a bit of polishing u think its worth sending out to any small labels?

 

[toolx]

nice little roller man. only thing i would want to change is making the snares even more dirtier. some distortion or a second distorted one over the top maybe.