Petec - Unknown WIP

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  1. TongueFlap

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    second part is pretty damn amazing no lies. not really a fan of the first minute though. some nice female vocals could round that off perfectly.
     
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    thanks man. I will have a play with it and post an update at some point.
     
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    thats deep man.. proper chilled out tune.. nice and melodic.. didnt know what to expect from the drop and it didnt dissapoint!

    got potential reet thur pete :) beaut!
     
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    Cheers alot mate. I will post an update soon. :)
     
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    updated! bump!
     
  7. Fuj

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    Howdy mate,

    Intro sounds sweet; another delayed/filtered piano-line leading out from 8/16th bar would suit it well IMO. Not sure about the HP breaks before the drop; maybe a a dif break needed... but the body is nice and deep as said. The choral/fem vox sit well, I can feel some heavily reverbed one shots would do well on this too.....

    Finish it!

    Peace, Fuj.
     
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    Cheers for the feedback dude! Yeh going to be adding a couple more vocal chops at some point. Thanks!
     
  9. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    really like this mate, deep and easy listening!!
    intro is pot on and the bass is nice and deep
     
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    would have liked some sort of pad in the intro to round it up a bit more and i didnt liked the transition to the drop.

    sound is crip tho and the overall feeling defo is nice!

    first piece i heard of yours aswell, big ups!
     
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    Thanks alot mate!!

    Niceone groelle - yeh i thought it was about time I started posting some tunes

    I was thinking earlier that the intro could do with a little extra, so that will be tonights task.
     
  12. Nautilus

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    the vocal chop during the second part should be moved a lil further into the song. Might I suggest during the transition around 1:40?
     
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    *State Self confessed VW nut

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    nice tune man i like it. i think a bit more defonision of the drums would be sweet
     
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    Solid man. I'm sure there's things could be different, I'd agree with the definition around the drop, but after a few listens I reckon it's pretty damn nice.
     
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    Cheers for the feedback all!! will take it all on board. getting back into making tunes again (and trying to finish them)! Bigups!!