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<blockquote data-quote="perspective" data-source="post: 336888" data-attributes="member: 28183">Ok, this isn't a finished track yet, this is something I've been working on for a few weeks. I need a little advice on this though - it feels like it is missing something in the top/mid area, and I'm not sure what to add. I'm also unsure how to arrange it all, I want to have a buildup, drop, long break, drop, shorter break then end but I'm getting confused working out how to do it!Anyway, have a listen and tell me what you think. This is the first tune I've managed to cobble together myself so be gentle <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite2" alt=";)" title="Wink&nbsp; &nbsp; ;)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=";)" /><a href="http://www.divshare.com/download/5352008-4ec">http://www.divshare.com/download/5352008-4ec</a>I uploaded it as a 320 so bear with it downloading, its about 9M.Any advice or constructive criticisms are welcome <img src="data:image/gif;base64,R0lGODlhAQABAIAAAAAAAP///yH5BAEAAAAALAAAAAABAAEAAAIBRAA7" class="smilie smilie--sprite smilie--sprite1" alt=":)" title="Smile&nbsp; &nbsp; :)" loading="lazy" data-shortname=":)" />Cheers</blockquote>

[QUOTE="perspective, post: 336888, member: 28183"] Ok, this isn't a finished track yet, this is something I've been working on for a few weeks. I need a little advice on this though - it feels like it is missing something in the top/mid area, and I'm not sure what to add. I'm also unsure how to arrange it all, I want to have a buildup, drop, long break, drop, shorter break then end but I'm getting confused working out how to do it! Anyway, have a listen and tell me what you think. This is the first tune I've managed to cobble together myself so be gentle ;) [url]http://www.divshare.com/download/5352008-4ec[/url] I uploaded it as a 320 so bear with it downloading, its about 9M. Any advice or constructive criticisms are welcome :) Cheers [/QUOTE]

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