- Joined
- Aug 5, 2008
- Location
- Portsmouth, UK
Ok, this isn't a finished track yet, this is something I've been working on for a few weeks. I need a little advice on this though - it feels like it is missing something in the top/mid area, and I'm not sure what to add.
I'm also unsure how to arrange it all, I want to have a buildup, drop, long break, drop, shorter break then end but I'm getting confused working out how to do it!
Anyway, have a listen and tell me what you think. This is the first tune I've managed to cobble together myself so be gentle
http://www.divshare.com/download/5352008-4ec
I uploaded it as a 320 so bear with it downloading, its about 9M.
Any advice or constructive criticisms are welcome
Cheers
I'm also unsure how to arrange it all, I want to have a buildup, drop, long break, drop, shorter break then end but I'm getting confused working out how to do it!
Anyway, have a listen and tell me what you think. This is the first tune I've managed to cobble together myself so be gentle
http://www.divshare.com/download/5352008-4ec
I uploaded it as a 320 so bear with it downloading, its about 9M.
Any advice or constructive criticisms are welcome
Cheers