Persephone's Theme - Funky, Synthy DnB with Counterpoint

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by anikom15, Jun 29, 2012.

  1. anikom15

    anikom15 New Member

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    This is my first song. Please tell me what you think. Let me know if the levels are good and if the simple beats and bassline have enough strength to carry the lead. Also maybe you can help me decide what style it really is.

     
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    anikom15 New Member

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    No one no like my music? :cry:
     
  3. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    You need to comment on other peoples songs to get feedback.
    And yes the song is pretty bad. In a tech sense and a musical sense. Every one has to start somewhere and it is no worse in fact way better than my first songs. My first advice is to get a break and high pass with your drums. There is plenty more but we can take one thing at a time. Thanks for postin and comment on other peoples tracks. Hope to see you back here.