peet - watch and pray

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by peet, Jan 31, 2004.

  1. peet

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    i'm in a bit of mist right here. don't know if this is quality enough to post here, hardly believe it is but i am needing some good criticism for real. so. check it out. and be easy on me will ya :flame:

    peet - watch and pray.mp3
     
  2. skylove

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    cool. i really liked this one, specially the beat and the bass. they got along very well.
    what did you use to make this song? only software or any hardware to?
     
  3. peet

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    thanks a lot man. you have no idea how much these small compliments help me out.

    i created this with propellerhead reason 2.5, and limited the sound in cubase vst32.

    cheers!
     
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    those synths at the very beginning didn't make sense, they totally clash with the rest of the tune...that lead synth sound is way too loud...that breakdown at around 2:30 or so needs to be smoother---everything just all of a sudden drops---maybe more reverb or something so that the lead synth blends in more and doesn't sound so abrupt...again, like in the other tune, the lead synth doesn't have any low end (or at least any that i could make out)...you might wanna work on those sudden stops, they break up the flow of the tune, and fatten up the snares, they sound a bit too thin...
     
  6. Thirdapparatus

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    Damn DAVE! we all cant be as talented as you...
    Hahahah.... jus jokin! BTW thanks for the t-racks
    tutorial on MW-DNB it really helped out alot..
    Did I mention you are everywhere?


    On the tune tip...I am not really feeling this one...It needs a lil more work..I couldnt get into
    it at all..But Im sure if you work at it for a couple more days youll get it
     
  7. Dave_Akuma

    Dave_Akuma aka composite.human

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    if in my reviews i come off like an asshole, it's not intentional, it's just that i'm being honest and trying to help, and there's nothing i hate more than a bullshitter, so i'm just telling it like it is...if we don't know what we need to work on and what we're doing wrong, we can't improve...cuz, that's what we're all here for, to improve, right? (well that and to hopefully attract the attention of some labels...)
     
  8. peet

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    please Dave, I rather hear if I suck then hear everyone just lying to me. Bad criticism (read: well argumented bad criticism) is often more functional than good criticism. As long as people keep telling me WHERE I make my mistakes I'm able to fix them. Thanks for the reviews. I'll pass the flow on by reviewing some of your stuff. Cheers :bone:
     
  9. Dave_Akuma

    Dave_Akuma aka composite.human

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    cool man...glad you understand (you'd be surprised how many people get bent outta shape when they recieve a 'bad' review and then feel obliged to give you a bad one in return)...peace
     
  10. skylove

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    cheers guys, helps out a lot to know where i'm at. :)