DnB Peace In Here

[oxxarwhite]

Hi all, I am new to this forum and I wanted to share this track with you.
I love making music/noise but I can't seem to make anything "worth" listening to, would love some critical feedback on this one!
Advices are welcome.

https://soundcloud.com/https%3A%2F%2Fsoundcloud.com%2Foxxarwhite%2Fpeace-in-here

 

[AlienWeapon]

pretty solid track but that arpeggio part is way overused, could deffinitly do with some variation in there, and i wasnt that keen on your use of the vocal sample, overall i quite like it though, catchy.

 

[oxxarwhite]

pretty solid track but that arpeggio part is way overused, could deffinitly do with some variation in there, and i wasnt that keen on your use of the vocal sample, overall i quite like it though, catchy.

thank you for telling me these things, I seem to sometimes get stuck/fixed on one thing i like about a song and just repeat it.
It is very useful with a fresh pair of ears, I will have this in mind!