PATHOGEN - untitled wip

[MARKLAR]

removed the vox and edited it a bit
all feedback is good
cheers

https://soundcloud.com/pathogendnb%2Fpathogen-untitled-wip

 

[Polymer]

I like it, might be nice to get a little bit of variation in there. Maybe a second theme?

 

[smoothassilk]

It's very on beat... which works very well actually, rolling..

Snare is a little overcompressed, or maybe a bit long

You could to a very empty breakdown, with almost nothing in it. Also, slightly rogue idea but I could see a rapper on this

 

[MARKLAR]

cheers for checking guys
@smoothassilk
i did actually start the tune with some ragga twins vocals but removed them can up the bit with them if u want

 

[D-Jhepz]

i remember you from way back... bangers bro that crisp neuro bass i envy so much

 

[smoothassilk]

i did actually start the tune with some ragga twins vocals but removed them can up the bit with them if u want

Aha that's funny. Yeah, I'd like to hear the vocal version

I was more thinking find someone to collab with (there are so many amateur rappers around these days) than using samples, but I think you'd have trouble finding someone who was both good and didn't overdo it and dominate the track.

 

[Misti]

Hell yeah man this rolls! I think the vibraphone sound at 40 seconds-ish could do with a bit of a lift to really get the atmospheres laid down. Really like the variation in hats and cymbals throughout, makes for a nice dynamic feel. The only other criticism I have is that the reece is maybe a bit constant as the track develops, I feel like some choppy bass stabs coming and going could really spruce things up!