PATHOGEN - untitled wip

smoothassilk

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It's very on beat... which works very well actually, rolling..

Snare is a little overcompressed, or maybe a bit long

You could to a very empty breakdown, with almost nothing in it. Also, slightly rogue idea but I could see a rapper on this
 

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i did actually start the tune with some ragga twins vocals but removed them can up the bit with them if u want
Aha that's funny. Yeah, I'd like to hear the vocal version

I was more thinking find someone to collab with (there are so many amateur rappers around these days) than using samples, but I think you'd have trouble finding someone who was both good and didn't overdo it and dominate the track.
 

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Hell yeah man this rolls! I think the vibraphone sound at 40 seconds-ish could do with a bit of a lift to really get the atmospheres laid down. Really like the variation in hats and cymbals throughout, makes for a nice dynamic feel. The only other criticism I have is that the reece is maybe a bit constant as the track develops, I feel like some choppy bass stabs coming and going could really spruce things up!
 
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