Paradise (Ft. Robin Thicke) [CLIP]

[CueTheKarma]

Paradise (free download)

https://soundcloud.com/cuethekarma%2Fparadise
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vocals were removed a while ago (thread topic won't update)
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[Hutar]

nice track and unusual beat

 

[CueTheKarma]

Thank you


Updated track!

 

[overdazed]

i like the drums, but thy could be more punchy

 

[nusphere]

Drums need to be LOUDER, I think personally also they are too choppy too often if you had a straighter rhythm for part of the track it would have more of an impact when the get chopped up. Also sounds like you have side-chained the melody in places to the kick this needs to be either more subtle or more explicit. I love the oooh ooh melody though

 

[~CriticalWaves~]

The drum pattern seem to be a little too much for meh and the switch ups (1:30) are a little funky. Also the arpeggiated sound toward the beginning sounds out of place. Sometimes simpler is better, I think this would be a hard tune to mix as well so maybe keep that in mind. just my opinion tho.

 

[Fishy:)]

wow, just wow thats alot of stuff at once

 

[CueTheKarma]

Re: Paradise [CLIP]

done check original post xD

free download too