Paradise (Ft. Robin Thicke) [CLIP]

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by CueTheKarma, Oct 24, 2011.

  1. CueTheKarma

    CueTheKarma New Member

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    Paradise (free download)



    Feedback?
    vocals were removed a while ago (thread topic won't update)
    Thanks :)
     
    Last edited: Nov 6, 2011
  2. Hutar

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    nice track and unusual beat ;)
     
  3. CueTheKarma

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    Thank you :)


    Updated track!
     
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    overdazed Real O.G.

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    i like the drums, but thy could be more punchy
     
  5. nusphere

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    Drums need to be LOUDER, I think personally also they are too choppy too often if you had a straighter rhythm for part of the track it would have more of an impact when the get chopped up. Also sounds like you have side-chained the melody in places to the kick this needs to be either more subtle or more explicit. I love the oooh ooh melody though :D
     
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    The drum pattern seem to be a little too much for meh and the switch ups (1:30) are a little funky. Also the arpeggiated sound toward the beginning sounds out of place. Sometimes simpler is better, I think this would be a hard tune to mix as well so maybe keep that in mind. just my opinion tho.
     
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    wow, just wow thats alot of stuff at once
     
  8. CueTheKarma

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    Re: Paradise [CLIP]

    done :) check original post xD

    free download too