Dubstep Paracyte - Shattered Memories

[paracyte]

Ez there guys,

Long time no track from me, this one brand new, first attempt in dubstep, please let me know whatcha think.
All critics and tips appreciated as allways.

http://soundcloud.com/paracyte/paracyte-shattered-memories

Cheers.

 

[paracyte]

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[Mr Fletch]

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Peeps are lazy.....embed your tracks so they dont have to link n youll get more feedback. Plus take a moment to give feedback to others aswell, what goes around comes around....

Now onto your track, I like the padwork in the intro, not sure about the kick, sounds a little farty. Oh.....I really like the vocal into the drop! And the drop is good, but it does sound a little random, like it doesnt have much structure (Which is maybe a good thing in dubstep) I also like your breakdown into the melodic part!

 

[bansal321]

the kick drum needs more layers, its too flat and id also turn up the snare too... the pads sound nice, not my kind of thing but good effort!

 

[paracyte]

HI

Thanks for your time guys, appreciate that.
big ups.