The snare is almost not even a snare, i would add a little more weight to it, not much but a little (i'm a fan of minimal so when i say not to much, i mean not to much).
I hear some really nice percussion in there but it's drowning out, i would use some different sounds or EQ the other elements so they stand out more..
00:26 i would move that hit, it doesn't sound right..
The kick needs a little more punch as it it already has enough boom and click. It get's lost in the bass, maybe EQ a little more.
1:26 Where the shuffle comes in, leave it out until 1:28
On the second drop with the amen, it's way to high in the mix, i don't see how it's not clipping, it's pretty hissy and harsh
Work on the levels of the Efx..
Overall, it just needs some mixing down and some levels adjusted, i like the second drop much better..
Just trying to help bud, so don't think im dogging your track