I'm not really into this kind of drum and bass, so don't take my judgement personally..
But anyway, some things I would change are the following:
-Make the drop louder than the intro, the transition is really odd right now..
-Add a louder subbass
-Beef up the sound of the main bass a little
-And lastly bring up the drums! They are dying under your synths
Nevertheless, the concept seems good. Add some varations here and there and get the above right and it could become a really awesome track!
Have fun,
Q