Yesterday I had alot of critism on my latest remix, got some really good feedback to work on and this came out. Started working on it yesterday and I just finished it. I hope the compression is better this time!
In terms of composition, you really only have one element going on, and it is highly repetitive, tends to sound like elevator music. You have the same exact "drop," twice, which isn't normally a good thing. While I can't criticize style, I'd suggest trying to make it sound less loop-driven. Essentially theres currently no movement going on. You have your "drop," then your main portion, which only goes back into your drop, repeat.