Oversight- Touch

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  1. oversight

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    Oversight- Touch (updated)

    Yo

    started this today, trancey liquid sort of thing




    would love to know what people think so far

    peace

    EDIT: have collaberated with drifta, tune now finished
     
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  2. msmith222

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    mix sounds good in the intro, i like the kit and the vibe. i know this is a WIP but a little more variation in the intro maybe. the drop sounds nice but sounds disconnected from the intro. i would bring the delay sound back sooner. and usually i think the porn moan is cheesy, but i think you could use one or two more here. nice sounds though, good tune.
     
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    thanks mate nice one for the feedback, all taken on board :)
     
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    Another nice tune matey.
    Personaly I like how the bass comes in after the intro, doesn't sound too disconected to me.
    Main thing I'd have done is shorten the intro. Gotta admit, although it sounds nice, I skipped a chunk of it.
    Keep up the good work man. :)
     
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    pretty much all said above already. It's great. Maybe still a bit more fx and spacey sounds and that sort of stuff.
     
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    cool, nice one guys, have been doing some work to this will upload it in a few days to see wht you think :)
     
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    i think ur kick drum sounds a little overcompressed and flat.. maybe change the sample . also your main pad could use some more fx on it, maybe some more changes and variation too, like a bridge with a totally different melody/bassline
     
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    sent the tune over to my mate drifta who has had a play with it, tune is now finished and signed to DNBB

    Oversight & Drifta- Touch

     
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    Sounds great to me :D
     
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