Oversight - The Secret (feat. Sativa)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by oversight, Jan 19, 2013.

  1. oversight

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    Hi,

    made this tune a while back, have now added some vocals to it, it would be good to know how people think they are sounding.

    cheers

     
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  2. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling VIP Junglist

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    Cool track, vocals might be a bit low in the intro imo. I think it would be nice if you used the vocals with the drums as well somewhere as there are no other major changes trough the 'drop'. Would be nice as a variation. Anyways its sounding good man!
     
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    Sounds good. The bassline sounds very similar to Logistics - Together, both in the notes played and the timbre.. might wanna change that, not a bad thing tho. I agree the vocals could be louder and used within the main body of the tune for some variation
     
  4. oversight

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    nice one guys :)
     
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    i only review tracks i like. ima keep it 100%

    did you use melodyne on the vocals?
    boost the vocals
    maybe chorus the vocals a little bit
    the mix needs to just sound better
    the vocals are too sparse, only heard in the intro and breakdown, try cutting them up and finding a way to work them into a verse and hook or groove
    the bass is really simple
    there isnt much going on musically