Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by oversight, Mar 16, 2014.
Started this yesterday. What do you reckon?
nice melodies. beat needs to be a bit more prominent. and there should be a deep bass running through it. good work so far.
I love the melodic content, the kick and snare are a bit weak though, i can barely hear the kick especially.
its a good start but i would really like it if after say 8 - 16 bars you ret rid of the the melody as it is and put like a smooth undulating bass line with elements of the melody coming in and out. I hope you understand what i mean
pretty much what junglistguy said... this could have soOoOoOo much more energy with a punching beat could introduce reeces or synth stabs as well for progression. Atmosphere is lovely!!
Nice one people I'll try and get back on it this weekend
nice. real smooth vibes here man. good progress for a day keep it up man!
here's one i just finnished recently lemme know what you think!!
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