Oversight - Reborn

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by oversight, Mar 16, 2014.

  1. oversight

    oversight Member

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    Hi,

    Started this yesterday. What do you reckon?



    Cheers
     
  2. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    nice melodies. beat needs to be a bit more prominent. and there should be a deep bass running through it. good work so far.
     
  3. AlienWeapon

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    I love the melodic content, the kick and snare are a bit weak though, i can barely hear the kick especially.
     
  4. Gruffsnuff

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    its a good start but i would really like it if after say 8 - 16 bars you ret rid of the the melody as it is and put like a smooth undulating bass line with elements of the melody coming in and out. I hope you understand what i mean :)
     
  5. Norax

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    pretty much what junglistguy said... this could have soOoOoOo much more energy with a punching beat :) could introduce reeces or synth stabs as well for progression. Atmosphere is lovely!!
     
  6. oversight

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    Nice one people :) I'll try and get back on it this weekend
     
  7. JoErOe

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    nice. real smooth vibes here man. good progress for a day keep it up man!
    here's one i just finnished recently lemme know what you think!!