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Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by oversight, Feb 24, 2013.

  1. oversight

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    New bit I've been working on.

    cheers :)
     
  2. EvezDroppin

    EvezDroppin how to change name,......

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    really relaxing... like it man :) no comments against it... was a pleasure to listen to
     
  3. Psychoholic

    Psychoholic Quantum Cunt

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    Such a nice track mate really nice ! A pleasure listening to it indeed, the only thing I could comment about it is the hats loop in the background its a bit too loud in my opinion thats all really ;) I digged it !
     
  4. oversight

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    nice one cheers guys :)
     
  5. Linguist

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    Very nice, nothing really to add. Definitely worth expanding
     
  6. pattycake

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    Personally I think you can only get away with repetitious drums when you either have a really interesting bassline or hook. Kick sounds flat, snare sounds exposed because there is a lack of balance. Try adding more interest such as chord stabs/non harshly reverberated things .
     
  7. djSing

    djSing Ill-usions

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    Yeah I like the elements of this track, pretty relaxing but I feel while the drum work is good.. it still sounds a little one dimensional. I'd say try and get the snare sounding a little more snappy, and try push the percussion out a little more using a stereo imager. Solid piece overall tho
     
  8. JimpaDirt

    JimpaDirt Vettvilling

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    Nice track! Synths are spot on, but as people have mentioned before its the drums that needs some working on. They sound a bit to dry to all the other elements here, so perhaps make them a bit more "laid back". But yeah, nice and relaxing :)
     
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    can only really restate what others have said. really nice chill track. good work!
     
  10. oversight

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    thanks everyone. all taken on board. :)
     
  11. oversight

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    Tune has been signed to DNBB :)

     
  12. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    sick tune. don't get what the others were saying with the drums, they sound spot on for that style. i think sometimes producers get caught up in the technicalities of how they make their sounds.. well done with that track mate
     
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  14. hughhardiemusic

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    really nice tune...guitar stuff is quality. the drum roll at 1.51 is so good!