I like the overall feel of the track, the melodies work well when they are moving about more with delay and filtering. Your snare sounds wrong to me it sounds kinda gritty in a wrong way perhaps because its been created with layered elements?Perhaps it need better EQing or swapping for something more appropriate. The bass needs to be more present, and do something more interesting. I really like the breakdown 1:55 to 2:40
Like the overall feel to it. Nice melodies with the stabby synth's. The drop kinda lets it down a bit, I wouldve liked to hear alot more movement in the bass, maybe some subtle, tearing midrange automating through it.