Oversight- "Empty days" deep, dark, chilled

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made this and would love some feedback if anyones got a couple of minutes





cheers!

 

I like the overall feel of the track, the melodies work well when they are moving about more with delay and filtering. Your snare sounds wrong to me it sounds kinda gritty in a wrong way perhaps because its been created with layered elements?Perhaps it need better EQing or swapping for something more appropriate. The bass needs to be more present, and do something more interesting. I really like the breakdown 1:55 to 2:40

 

cheers for listening

i will take your thoughts into consideration when im doignsome more to it when ie rested my ears

 

Like the overall feel to it. Nice melodies with the stabby synth's. The drop kinda lets it down a bit, I wouldve liked to hear alot more movement in the bass, maybe some subtle, tearing midrange automating through it.

 

cheers mate nice one

 

Nice vibes,maybe some corrections on snare drum,needs to me be just little bit punchy,but less clapy that is imo..

 

thanks mate

 

Good job with those lead melodies, chilled it is.
As an atmospheric job it works well, I don't mind the snare either.

 

thanks mate, itching to get back on this when i get time, will post an update