wrong section man, theres an area called 'New Talent and Track Reviews'
post your next tunes in there mate
this should be in a computer game... i like it.
reminds me old skool games. i'd want to here some 8-bit quick arps. lost its energy with out it being a breakdown at 1:17 the lost energy could be fixed. maybe go half time or something so it sounds more intentional strip things out with a bit more skill.
very dancefloor, has a potential. dunno about that saw bass, but then im not a fan of that kind of cheesy sound. dont think that its the right thing for this tune, i dont think a reese would sit either. try some variants man.