Time for some real-talk yeah?
I thought this was fucking wicked and I really hope you keep working on it.
Right now it sounds like it's building up to become something huge, massive and messy, lot's of tension building in there, you've got my head nodding but if you want people to jump up and down with their hands in the air I think you need to bring in some breaks and mess with the rhythm of the bass and things.
But seriously, the noises that are there now are great, keep at it!