Drum & Bass Outsīder - Cyber Demon (clip)

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by jonnyk, Jan 26, 2014.

  1. jonnyk

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    here, my fresh track...

     
  2. TheVeil

    TheVeil An Breakbeat Aficionado

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    The vocal samples are kind of cool. It feels like you're going somewhere with this track, but needs some work IMO. I like the drum patterns, but they snare could hit harder/the kick could be beefier. Maybe try layering a couple different snare/kick samples or try layering in a piece of a break. Oh yeah, where's the bass at? Needs some filth in that area. Altogether, you have a really solid structure here, certain components need a little bit of attention. Cheers!
     
  3. jonnyk

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    Thank U man! You're absolutely right. But unfortunately I'm in Austria @ a seasonal work and I only have one laptop. I can not bring out more of it, until I'm at home and have a cool soundcard. :) (y)
     
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    marcelkennard Storms comin in Annie

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    Sounds quite fresh! Not a bad track by any means.
     
  5. jonnyk

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