Our First Track!

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by RhythmicSoulz, Jan 28, 2011.

  1. RhythmicSoulz

    RhythmicSoulz New Member

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  2. elmaruk

    elmaruk slannndaaaaaaar

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    Not sounding too bad for your first track

    was kinda surprised when the banjo came in but its seems to work

    the arrangements good and things come in and go out when they should be

    not too keen on the whoah's but the rest of the vocals sound nice.

    i think you could work alot on the bassline, it sounds very high on the mids so a bit of eq maybe? also not too keeen on the 3rd note in the melody.
    just seems to me like everything else has variation except the bass? i don't think much needs to be changed but just at the end of every 16 bars or so maybe switch it up at bit.
    with this track i think whatll sound awesome is if you resampled your wobble and appyled some more filter effects to it (camel phats great for this)

    needs work but i think if you did it youd have a fairly solid track...my opinion tho :)

    nice
     
  3. logikz

    logikz I Am Not The King Staff Member

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    i agree with elmaruk here on most points. its a fine effort for your first tune and the banjo sound struck me as comical but not totally out of place. the drums are sick with the low pitch, maybe too sick even.
     
  4. Fishy:)

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    nice:) and pretty much what elmaruk said
     
  5. RUSSLA

    RUSSLA DNBF Monarch

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    Big up Sully!