Otic - Ymir

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ooffft nice man
really dig the vibes on this one

only thing i really noticed was that low timpani/verb stab thing that starts around 1:31 feels a bit muddier than the rest of the mix, kinda stood out a bit listening on a pair of T50s


tight work all round though dude
props
 
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This is a reaaaally nice tune! Really enjoy the whole vibe. Something I would say is that there's a nice level of progression with the melodies, but with the percussion its very similar throughout. Maybe would be worth subtle changeups after 16/32 bars, and varied fills within the bars. To be honest though, I think it's already an excellent bit of work!

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Glad you like it man cheers.
I get what you mean but I think there's quite a bit going on already so don't really want to overcomplicate it with too many switches (if I haven't done that already ha)
But I take what you've said on board and maybe I'll put in some fills and a few more changes.
Thanks fella, I appreciate your critique!
 
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