Otic - Ymir

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by rotein, Aug 12, 2014.

  1. rotein

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    Easy guys, here's a kinda minimal, deep tune I've been working on.
    Any feedback is appreciated and valued
    Cheers
     
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  2. GhostOfMuttley

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    ooffft nice man
    really dig the vibes on this one

    only thing i really noticed was that low timpani/verb stab thing that starts around 1:31 feels a bit muddier than the rest of the mix, kinda stood out a bit listening on a pair of T50s


    tight work all round though dude
    props
     
  3. rotein

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    Thanks man,
    appreciate the positive feedback, and yeah, you're right, that could do with being sharpened up a bit.

    Cheers fella
     
  4. pareidolius

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    This is a reaaaally nice tune! Really enjoy the whole vibe. Something I would say is that there's a nice level of progression with the melodies, but with the percussion its very similar throughout. Maybe would be worth subtle changeups after 16/32 bars, and varied fills within the bars. To be honest though, I think it's already an excellent bit of work!

     
  5. rotein

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    Glad you like it man cheers.
    I get what you mean but I think there's quite a bit going on already so don't really want to overcomplicate it with too many switches (if I haven't done that already ha)
    But I take what you've said on board and maybe I'll put in some fills and a few more changes.
    Thanks fella, I appreciate your critique!
     
  6. junglistguy2221

    junglistguy2221 Drum & Bass Producer

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    percussion is sick. good job. mix sounds good for that style of track too.
     
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