Original vocals D+B soul roller - thoughts appreciated

[Dan JJJJJJ]

https://soundcloud.com/dan-bowler%2Fround-the-corner-feat-atg-positive-vibe-mix

 

[Manu Forti]

Hey,
Percussion and drums are brilliant. Nice vibe with the Rhodes too. Melody is pleasant and mixed well although i feel the guitar needs to be a little more subtle.
Vocal for me at the moment distract me a bit much. Sure i get they are early stages but for me, i would definitely consider putting them back a bit to avoid cheese.
In my opinon Underworld nailed a style just like this, for your reference...

Nice though, experimental and bold, i dig.

 

[Flux Betazerfall]

These vocals are priceless man. I dig this wobbly bass in this alot. Really unique vibe aswell. The drums could be a bit louder to my taste.

 

[Dan JJJJJJ]

Thanks for the replies people... This project has been on ice for a while but the positive feedback is inspiring me to go back and finish it. Might actually have a professional vocalist on board as well

 

[m:ekz]

Really nice track, and it does sound different which is a good thing. I agree with Flux with about increasing the drum volume.

 

[Dan JJJJJJ]

Got this finished off if anyone wants a listen