Orchestral D & B - Struggle

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by tarranjoe, Feb 1, 2008.

  1. tarranjoe

    tarranjoe Active Member

    Joined:
    Jun 8, 2007
    Messages:
    1,215
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    manchester
    this is the first of my tunes i've upped. i'm happy with it but would like a bit of advice from people a bit more experienced than me, and just to see what people think of my stuff, so all feedback is welcome, cheers

    http://www.sendspace.com/file/hx5zaz
     
  2. tarranjoe

    tarranjoe Active Member

    Joined:
    Jun 8, 2007
    Messages:
    1,215
    Likes Received:
    0
    Location:
    manchester
    anyone? i mean, it's not jump up but you could still listen!! lol
     
  3. Rom-Ductions

    Rom-Ductions New Member

    Joined:
    Dec 26, 2007
    Messages:
    26
    Likes Received:
    0
    hey if u could myspace ure tracks i would be more then willing to listen and give you my opinion i just find sendspace a bit hard to access and dosnt the link expire after a while?? let me no kool g!:hype:
     
  4. optimystic

    optimystic Member

    Joined:
    Jan 3, 2006
    Messages:
    44
    Likes Received:
    0
    hey man, had a listen, like the melody, but i feel you could include a change in there somwhere i.e get some extra instruments + write another melody to spin off on before returning to the main one. The drums need more attention, get some 'ghost' snares inthere - quieter snare rhythms that fall around the main one. perhaps experiment with adding layers of breakbeat in there - pay attention to eq, think about what frequencies you are choosing the particular sample for and cut out the ones that you arent. couldnt hear the bass cos im on crappy speakers, but will have another listen asap.
    ive done a new toon if your interested - http://www.myspace.com/optimysticjunglist