oppions please

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by IV4, Aug 13, 2011.

  1. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Working on this song with my three year old boy. Wanted to get some feedback on what could be done better before I go on with the track.
     
  2. Fishy:)

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    very interesting intro man;P but it does remind me of toilet lol.
    Anyways, ur drum needs to punch more, that snare isent hitting enough or the kick, need more perc to imo:)
    bass has potential but still sounds abit dry, would try some more or diffrent modulations and add more sub please and less high freqs
     
  3. luciduk

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    maybe stick to writing without your infant doesnt sound like his techniques are helping you, altho they do say its better to start young!!! ;)
     
  4. BLoodstaiN`

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    too much high mid's i think,
    Nice concept though,
    it's got me moving!