aight here we go. intro has an old school pendulum esque vibe to it.. and you built a nice atmosphere with it imo, but the drop left me wanting more, if i'm honest, it just didn't drop with the intensity i was hoping for. consider adding some more "motion" features to your drop, rather than just straight synths.. it sounds like the sounds could use more processing to get more character out of them. the atmosphere of the sounds youve chosen/created are good, they just need some more development.
your mixdown isn't bad, all things considered, just the composition of the tune itself is a bit simple. all in all, this has a lot of potential, and i think with some time spent on re working the drop you could make this something really special.
All the best man! and i hope we see more of your posts in the near future, there are a lot of things that have a lot of potential here bud!