one of my first

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by HURTZEE, Oct 21, 2009.

  1. HURTZEE

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    Lucidproduction i aint fraid of no ghosts

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    nice ideas mate i like wot ur gettin at but i cant help feelin it needs a little something to keep it rolling. its missing something but i dunno what to suggset! good work still pretty clean
     
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    this, and i think its the drums, the atmos and the bass seem cool, but the drums are a bit bare. more percussion.

    good for a first track.

    also, get a soundcloud account, youtube does your music no justice.
     
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    nice to share one of your first!
     
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    the drums sound a little empty, and with a little too much shimmer up top (probably thanks to youtube). the bassline needs a little more interest, and the track needs to be filled out a bit. but i think the ideas are solid, and it sounds like you are certainly heading the right direction. keep it up man!
     
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    safe for the comments people.

    i see wot ur sayin wiv the drum beats, maybe adding an amen wud help.

    and a little more stuff added to the tune to make it more filled out is deffo worth a try, sum other people i showed this too also said a the same kinda thing