one of my first

[HURTZEE]

AV A LISTEN AN SEE WOT U LOT THINK, FEEDBACK ALWAYS APPRECIATED

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VjOulGj98eo

 

[Lucidproduction]

nice ideas mate i like wot ur gettin at but i cant help feelin it needs a little something to keep it rolling. its missing something but i dunno what to suggset! good work still pretty clean

 

[rob_del_terror]

nice ideas mate i like wot ur gettin at but i cant help feelin it needs a little something to keep it rolling. its missing something but i dunno what to suggset! good work still pretty clean

this, and i think its the drums, the atmos and the bass seem cool, but the drums are a bit bare. more percussion.

good for a first track.

also, get a soundcloud account, youtube does your music no justice.

 

[msmith222]

the drums sound a little empty, and with a little too much shimmer up top (probably thanks to youtube). the bassline needs a little more interest, and the track needs to be filled out a bit. but i think the ideas are solid, and it sounds like you are certainly heading the right direction. keep it up man!

 

[HURTZEE]

safe for the comments people.

i see wot ur sayin wiv the drum beats, maybe adding an amen wud help.

and a little more stuff added to the tune to make it more filled out is deffo worth a try, sum other people i showed this too also said a the same kinda thing