One Conciousness

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by rysk, Jul 2, 2013.

  1. rysk

    rysk Part-time waster

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    Almost done with this one, just needs a second half. This one's different to a lot of the stuff i try and make, and it all came together quite nicely i think.

    all your positive and negative feedback is appreciated

     
  2. DjCartel

    DjCartel Well-Known Member

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    feeling the intro on this man, very atmospheric. love that vocal sample too, good find. i find the track lacks a lot of punch, the kick is really hidden, id try and eq it with the bass a bit better. same with the snare to a lesser extent. bass is deep and good. hats sound clean too, as is the percussive elements. overall a good effort, id like to hear it finished!
     
  3. Eternaloptimist

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    enei sample pack?
    well, bass could do witha bit of variation and drums defo need to come up a bit.
     
  4. IV4

    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    Have you ever spliced a Kick? If not it is a great way to get the kick to punch through the mix without destroying sound quality. The vocal is hilarious, and I love the snare.