Love the vocal. I do agree about the mixdown, it's a bit too dark for liquid if you ask me...what I'm sort of getting from this is that your sounds are too bright and obvious. Piano and synth are at full cutoff, wheres if you knock the velocity down on the piano a bit, I reakon it'd sink into the mix better, give it all some depth.
Again, the vocal is great, and I love the chopping...bassline sounds fantastic. Got the potential to be great I reakon, just needs a little love