Ominous clouds

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by Stiffer, Aug 14, 2010.

  1. Stiffer

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    yes really liked it although i felt it kinda lost its way towards the end and became more sedate i assume your not finished with it though.

    anyway needs a bump and some more input i reckon ^^^^^^
     
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    yeah i see what your saying it does kinda lose its way a bit, i think some sort of ed rush and optical style bass coming in might help.. cheers for the feedback mate allways appreciated!!
     
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    The snare seems quite dry, maybe you should dampen it a little with some sort of effect? However it does sound a little bit better in the main part of the tune. It does need a little more, non percussive elements to keep it interesting towards the end. Overall, a nice little roller, good stuff :D
     
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    yeh man i like this. needs variation towards the end and u got sick lil roller imo, nice work!