Ok .. First Unfinished beat . Crtiscism needed

Maxg

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souns quite cool dude - but if you want me to criticise...

i'd tighhten up the beats a bit using less reverb or compression or something - could have a few more hits/hats in there too???
I like the synths before the drop.
I like the drop, but sounds like it's missing something - sonically there's not much midrange synth sound so lacks "impact".
nice roller though

Keep up the good work though - it sounds miles better than my first unfinished beat!
 

dar kist

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thats interesting..... you didnt thank maxg for his feedback, or leave him a comment, just bumped it back up, why don't you go post this in the right section for a start and give some others some feedback while you are there, people like you really piss me off,
 

D-Tektiv

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thats interesting..... you didnt thank maxg for his feedback, or leave him a comment, just bumped it back up, why don't you go post this in the right section for a start and give some others some feedback while you are there, people like you really piss me off,
Yeah, even i have to admit that was kinda silly not to respond back to Maxg for takin' the time to check out the beat and share some thoughts on it...
 

Maxg

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This kind of thing pisses me off.

Why the f**k do you mark it as spam when you wanted criticism and people to comment. Was just trying to help you out!!!

My comments may not be correct - i.e. sonically you may think your beats are tight, but hey just my opinion and ears (which to be fair are pretty mullered)
 
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T Leaf

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i was gonna say that you could add a lower octave on the synth for the drop... and i still will say it, as it might help others thicken their stuff out a bit.

BUT YOU, YOU LITTLE FUCKER

take the time to thank those that help you

/thread
 

jbomba

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sorry bout that one fellas i was on my way out the door. I didnt mean that i considered max g's post spam i was refering to the bump i typed. Thanks for the input mate. i agree the drop is missing something im gonna try putting another mid range layer in there. My drum sequencing skills aernt the best aswell. I prob should drop the reverb on the main hits aswell as the break
 

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I like the synths and the melodys but in my opinion the drum samples, specifically the bassdrum and the snare/clap doesn't sound all too good. I'd use something more, how should I say, damaged, something more powerful if you know what I mean. Also, maybe chop the first beat up a little more, make it more broken.
I hope you can see what I mean :D

Sintoras
 

jbomba

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I like the synths and the melodys but in my opinion the drum samples, specifically the bassdrum and the snare/clap doesn't sound all too good. I'd use something more, how should I say, damaged, something more powerful if you know what I mean. Also, maybe chop the first beat up a little more, make it more broken.
I hope you can see what I mean :D

Sintoras
yeah man will hopefully get some time to produce this week end. Planning to make a new break hopefully will use it in this track. Thanks for the feedback
 
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