Ok .. First Unfinished beat . Crtiscism needed

Discussion in 'Production' started by jbomba, Aug 17, 2009.

  1. jbomba

    jbomba New Member

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  2. Maxg

    Maxg The Core

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    souns quite cool dude - but if you want me to criticise...

    i'd tighhten up the beats a bit using less reverb or compression or something - could have a few more hits/hats in there too???
    I like the synths before the drop.
    I like the drop, but sounds like it's missing something - sonically there's not much midrange synth sound so lacks "impact".
    nice roller though

    Keep up the good work though - it sounds miles better than my first unfinished beat!
     
  3. jbomba

    jbomba New Member

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  4. dar kist

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    thats interesting..... you didnt thank maxg for his feedback, or leave him a comment, just bumped it back up, why don't you go post this in the right section for a start and give some others some feedback while you are there, people like you really piss me off,
     
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    Yeah, even i have to admit that was kinda silly not to respond back to Maxg for takin' the time to check out the beat and share some thoughts on it...
     
  6. Maxg

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    This kind of thing pisses me off.

    Why the f**k do you mark it as spam when you wanted criticism and people to comment. Was just trying to help you out!!!

    My comments may not be correct - i.e. sonically you may think your beats are tight, but hey just my opinion and ears (which to be fair are pretty mullered)
     
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    i am a little late to the party, but i agree with all of Maxg's "spam"
     
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    Nice one :D
     
  9. T Leaf

    T Leaf Neighbourhood Sickhead

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    i was gonna say that you could add a lower octave on the synth for the drop... and i still will say it, as it might help others thicken their stuff out a bit.

    BUT YOU, YOU LITTLE FUCKER

    take the time to thank those that help you

    /thread
     
  10. jbomba

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    sorry bout that one fellas i was on my way out the door. I didnt mean that i considered max g's post spam i was refering to the bump i typed. Thanks for the input mate. i agree the drop is missing something im gonna try putting another mid range layer in there. My drum sequencing skills aernt the best aswell. I prob should drop the reverb on the main hits aswell as the break
     
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    I like the synths and the melodys but in my opinion the drum samples, specifically the bassdrum and the snare/clap doesn't sound all too good. I'd use something more, how should I say, damaged, something more powerful if you know what I mean. Also, maybe chop the first beat up a little more, make it more broken.
    I hope you can see what I mean :D

    Sintoras
     
  12. jbomba

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    yeah man will hopefully get some time to produce this week end. Planning to make a new break hopefully will use it in this track. Thanks for the feedback