Offman - Drive

[Offman]

new upcoming track: i don't know what kind of genre is that, it's 174 BPM so i think it could be defined drum&bass, but this is not important.. any good suggestions or critics to improve it? i'm just working on it it is just a preview clip.. thnx in advance

http://soundcloud.com/offmanmusik/drive

respect to all of you guys
offman

 

[Fishy:)]

Lovely minimal man;P

 

[miszt]

new upcoming track: i don't know what kind of genre is that, it's 174 BPM so i think it could be defined drum&bass, but this is not important.. any good suggestions or critics to improve it? i'm just working on it it is just a preview clip.. thnx in advance

http://soundcloud.com/offmanmusik/drive

respect to all of you guys
offman

really nice sound, interesting melodies and soundscape, it all feels a bit weak tho, think the sounds need a little more definition, esp the vocal, nice work tho, diffrent to, good stuff!