Drum & Bass Oceantide - Witchery

Discussion in 'New Talent & Track Reviews' started by oceantide, Oct 15, 2013.

  1. oceantide

    oceantide New Member

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    Hey everyone! My name is Oceantide, I'm a drum&bass producer from Ukraine. I'd like to share one of my tracks with you guys, and would appreciate your detailed feedback )
    Also, I'm kinda new to this forum, so my apologies if something is wrong with the format of this topic )


    https://soundcloud.com/oceantidednb/witchery
     
  2. oceantide

    oceantide New Member

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    Don't be shy ))
     
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    MisterApe 8bit junkie

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    Very deeb vibe : ), I'm digging it!
     
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    Thanks man! Was there anything that you didn't like about the sound/production quality? I'm asking this because I also need some advice on how to improve my sound )
     
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    MisterApe 8bit junkie

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    Could use more variation in the bassline, but outside of that I'm not quite sure what I'd critique on, it's a good track : ).
     
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    Props on the original break. Other than that, I can't really tell since it's really not my cup of tea :)
     
  7. Pyrococcus

    Pyrococcus Urban Break Twister

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    Really cool vibes and nice production.. For a 6:49 length it only needs more variation / build-up for me.
    E.g. the track could benefit hugely from introducing a new instrument or at least some melody variation in the break after 3:30.
    Same for the bassline in general.
     
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    Thanks! ) Yeah, now I agree that the whole track could use a bit more variations. I was just a bit bit worried not to overwhelm the track with melody, in order to keep that deep vibe flowing ) Will do better next time, thanks for your feedback )