I really like it mate.. nice rolling baseline. sounds pretty good. not sure about that little sample that is always in tunes! cant explain what one it is but its at the start! i dont do producing so my feedback probably isnt that helpful for you!
The build up was good but maybe shorten it a little bit or drop it before that little break where the piano like samples come in. But over all from the untrained production ear i thought its really good and you should keep at it mate
Promising until 11 seconds and generally musical elements are ok. Drums are massive problem, they have zero impact to them, sounds like they are highpassed from 1Khz or something. Structure wise, 2 minutes intro before getting any bass, seems like an intro to the breakdown. but i can't listen past the drums at the moment.