nu track jump up track, feedback appreciated

[unknownelementz]

nu jump up track by my self called murderous rage, any feedback on any aspect i.e sequencing, synths, drums mix down would be appreciated.


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this is only the first verse and break down, didnt wana put full track up! enjoi!!

 

[subprime]

Your main bass line is sitting too loud over the rest.
Nice vocal sample. Keep at it.

 

[unknownelementz]

safe thanks a lot