nu track jump up track, feedback appreciated

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  1. unknownelementz

    unknownelementz Elementz

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    nu jump up track by my self called murderous rage, any feedback on any aspect i.e sequencing, synths, drums mix down would be appreciated.


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    this is only the first verse and break down, didnt wana put full track up! enjoi!!
     
  2. subprime

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    Your main bass line is sitting too loud over the rest.
    Nice vocal sample. Keep at it.
     
  3. unknownelementz

    unknownelementz Elementz

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    safe thanks a lot