Notorious BIG - Everyday Struggle (AOR remix)

[djnewton]

I'd love some feedback on this tune i'm working on. Its not DnB but i love this forum so I trust you guys for feedback

Youtube
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T7x3VRZQUd8
Soundcloud

https://soundcloud.com/application-of-random%2Feveryday-struggle-remix-first-draft

 

[~CriticalWaves~]

from the first beat i was wanting it to be at a faster bpm kinda had an ol skool house feel to it would a been nice at 150bpm but then the lyrics kicked and it sounded a little dirty and muffled to me but the tune does have a good roll to it good use of pads and such.

 

[djnewton]

Yeah it is muffled for sure. Waiting till i can get into the studio to clean it up. I was listening to the dizzie rascal "bonkers" tune and wanted to do sumin simlar. Thanks for the feedback, listened to some of your stuff, very nice, so i started follwing you on the cloud

 

[~CriticalWaves~]

Thanx man! big ups for the cloud add!