musically its sweet. drums need sorting out a bit, a little more focus on the kick and the snare. and maybe a little more variation in the piano and pad. nice atmospheric track though. they are always more difficult than the outright destroyers IMO.
drums are definatley the next thing to work on. agree with the kick, i'm trying to keep it behind the bass enough so it's not intrusive on the rest of the track, but i'm struggling with the principle a bit. i'd like to give the break some more variation along the way as well but there's no real snare to speak of and that's the way i like it. i think the percussion type snare hit at the end of the bar drives beat on and a fuller snare just sounds out of place.