Northern Seagull - Groom Range [something about techstep)

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  1. Northern Seagul

    Northern Seagul Active Member

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    Hi guys! :)

    I present for you my last track. It's like modern techstep with deep bassline. Interesting what you think about it ;)
    I'll waitint for your feedbacks and comments, it's important for me.



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  2. pareidolius

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    You're best tune yet, really like the variation in the drums after 8 bars. You could try with a bit more progression with the bassline throughout the tune though. It works really well though!
     
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    thanks u for your comment : )
     
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    IV4 Currently a newt.

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    So far I like the intro, the evil horn is nice, and those wide synths are cool. When the drop hits I am not sure I like the wide synth sounds. Drums and bass sound really nice and I love the way the drums keep evolving. The fx really help move the song along.
    The break down is working out well. I am not sure I like the half step for the second drop, I feel it has been played out.
    Only advice would be to come up with some thing different for the wide synth bass sounds.
     
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    Thnx you for feedback and advice :)
     
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    Zeal Ohm/C2D/Dark Asylum/Ennex

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    Some really nice movement in the track
    Little bit repetative maybe
    some of the synths and fx sound a bit loud here to me?

    Kool tune man :)
     
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    sick, agree with it being ever so slightly repetitive but it only needs a slight variation here in there, maybe some higher stabs just to contrast the deeper vibes of the fx etc

    i don't mind the halftime bit just coz it's not the standard kick-1 snare-3

    tidy work though mang, nice juan
     
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    thnx a lot for your feedbacks guys :)
     
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    nukleamojo Producer & Blogger Super Joshi

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    My thoughts have already been pretty much covered above but I thought I'd give you a shout anyway. Well done on this tune. The halfstep drop made me feel a bit funny. In a good way. A bit unresolved maybe.

    If you do what the guys have said it'll be a great tune. Big up!
     
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    Thanks for your opinion!
    Respect :)
     
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    ApeCat Human Dubplate

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    Nice intro, could do with a bit of evolution, if you catch my drift, right now there's some stuff going on for a while, then suddenly something else is happening, there's nothing leading into it.
    B-line is alright, but since the sound is so vocal in a way, it would be nice with some different phrases.
    Drums sound tight, mixdown sounds good, at least on my laptop.
     
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    Really like this all sounds crisp and tips my brain over the edge so yeah fkn nice
     
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    thnx a lot for comments guys! : )